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Tuesday, August 8, 2017

Writing/Letter

Kayla Gadsby
180 Waterloo Road    
Friday.   30.   2017.   
8042

Mrs Shehata
180 Waterloo Road
Friday.   30.   2017.   
8042

Mrs Whea Mel
180 Waterloo Road
Friday.   30.   2017.   
8042

Miss Tozer
180 Waterloo Road
Friday.   30.   2017.   
8042

Dear Mrs Shehata,Whea Mel and Miss Tozer

I am writing this because I believe that we should have GoNoodle every day because everyone loves it. I am going to explain some reason why we should have Gonoodle every day.  The first reason why is because it can be played by anyone no age limit. Second reason why is because when it is winter it can get really cold outside. The last reason why is that you don’t have to go to the gym and wasted time and money. I will now explain all of these reasons in greater detail.

The first reason why is because it would be great thing for everyone. When you first play it is enjoyable for anyone and any age. You can even play when you are 80 it doesn't matter because you can play it at any age.You could even play it when your three years old. It is also family friendly. Everyone will enjoy GoNoodle some of them are funny too. It gets your blood going through your body and it gets your heart racing and  can keep you in shape and motivated for the day.

The second reason why is what if it was snowing and you had to do fitness or exercise outside if you had Gonoodle you could do fitness inside were it is warm.GoNoodle is an inside and outside  thing so that means you can do it whenever. You can do it at night or day any time any where it could even be in your lounge or even outside it doesn't matter. It is fitness and you could have a awesome time while doing GoNoodle.

The last reason why is fitness for everyone if you want to get in shape and you don't want to go to a gym then just play GoNoodle. If you go the Gym then you wasting time and money every day but if you play GoNoodle then you won’t have to pay and  you not wasting time. If you do at less one a day every day you will be in shape and fit ready. This is a great thing to do if you want to get in shape and  it also just takes 4 minutes or 5 minutes of your day/time.

This has been my writing about if we could have GoNoodle everyday here are the reasons I used in my persuasive writing. 1st reason is that it would be great for any age the 2nd reason why is that it could be cold or snowing and we would be doing fitness outside. The 3rd and last reason is that it can get you in shape and you won’t have to go to the gym to waste time and money. This has been my writing of that we should have GoNoodle  everyday.


Your sincerely: Kayla


Here is my writing.This term we have been learning to write persuasive writing and letters.we have been learning to write persuasive text we also have been learning to write a proper letter.










 

2 comments:

  1. wow kayla i really like the way that you have explain the reason why we should have go-noddle. keep the grate woke up.

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  2. Hi
    I really like how you have stood out to show some appreciation for what the teachers are teaching us. Maybe next time you could got more student voice and include more what other people think as well. I think its really cool how you backed up your reasons with detailed explanations.
    Ruby

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