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Cellphones have a negative effect on many teen's in today's worlds and time. The main reasons for teen's to be addicted to their phones is social media. Kid's these days feel like it's a necessity to always check up on social media to see how others are going. I feel like teen's need to really get a life and realise social media isn't always the way to go. Teen's also fee like they can't have fun without technology which is completely untrue. Next is the amount of time teen's spend on their phones its really ridiculous. I honestly can't understand how people can spend 90% of their day on technology. I personally can't spend more than a few hours a day on technology. Teen's need to understand it not healthy to spend long periods of time on technology. The last thing is the effects technology has on people/teen's. The amount of depression has increase is concerning. Most kids with depression spend so much time on technology. Another effect is technology can harm your eyes and can make you blind depending on how long you spend on it. Overall technology is bad because of how addicting it can be. I really hope teen's realise that it isn't the best to spend long periods of time on it.
Hi Kayla, I like your blog on cellphones. I like how you did a lawyer paragraph instead of a different paragraph like a persuasive paragraph. I like how you put in your own points of views as you can realate to the topic. I cant really think of anything you have done wrong. Overall you did a good job, keep up the good work!
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