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In class for writing  we wrote a story and then got told we had to make an animation.

The hardest thing for me was making the animation come to life.  The easy thing was to copy and paste the writing in to the speech bubbles.

reading

The Cardboard Cathedral

By Bruce Granshaw

Knowledge: List 2 things from the text

1. Did you know the new cardboard cathedral is not just made out cardboard it is made out of wood,cardboard, glass and plastic.

2. There was an earthquake that hit at 22 February 2011 and a lot of people were injured and trapped under buildings.

Comprehension: List the main thing in the text and a new title.

One of the main things was that the most popular buildings the cathedral was unsafe so they had to put it down because of the earthquake that happen in 22 February 2011 so they made a new one out of cardboard,wood and glass. I think this text should be called Earthquake Gone Wrong.

Application: Draw a three frame picture strip

On Tuesday 22 February 2011 it was a great day till this happened. All the buildings were damaged...

But the one building of all was the cathedral so a week  after the earthquake happen some builders came and see what it look like so they can make a new one so here some of the people that made that happen and make it look like it is know Shigeru Ban if it wasn't him it wouldn't look like that, if it wasn't for the owners of the cathedral that could get Shigeru Ban.    

Know that the cardboard cathedral is done by the one and only Shigeru Ban that designed it and the owners the made Shigeru Ban come to designed the one and only cardboard cathedral.

Analysis: Make a flowchart of the main thing’s in the text

Synthesis new ideas: Name one thing you would change

One thing I would change is that at the start there is a capital letter in Christchurch and there two capital letter in there that in Christchurch when there’s only one. I would like to change the tile for the paragraph’s because it too hard to read.

Evaluate-make: Rate this text out  of 10

I rate like text out of 10 a 8 because there was a mistake on the first page and  that the title's  are to hard to understand for me and many other people that would read this story but everything else is perfect.

writing

A night at the museum 

It was  just another night until…

I felt shivers down my Spine at the museum I look at my watch it was 8:00p.m but nothing was unusual was  happening so I had a look to see  everything was OK and it was. It hit 9:00 and it look scary but then it hit 12:00 and I was so sleepy so I went to sleep.Then the madness happened. There were loud noise coming from the other rooms I look up and opened my eyes to see what was going on and the bugs were alive and I screamed because there was a big tarantula and I’m scared of them. So I opened the door to see if all of the other bugs and stuff were.It was so Mistress to see all of these things moving and I sore a cute little monkey but when I was going to pick it up it scratch me in the nose because it was not like a normal monkey he was so so mad at humans.So I ran out of that room to get away from the monkey. I looked at my watch and it was 1:00 A.M. I was scared to look in the dinosaur department so I looked to see if there is some pillows to protect myself  from the dinosaurs. But that was if they were alive so I opened the door a little bit to see and there were a lot of them everywhere. There was this big one and It keep roaring and roaring at me. I ran out of that place so I did not be there diner. There was a little kid and his name was ed he was stuck in glass cause he was a zombie but then a sore a kid that was all made out of bones but he was the same he was stuck in glass so I could not hear was he was saying.I look at the birds room and I sore a Moa. So I back my way out of that room.there was all of the old people that first came to New Zealand they were trying to brake the glass the way  out. I look at my watch and it was 4:00.A.m And all of their Museum bug and stuff were trying to get out of  there rooms to try and get me.But I got told from the a person that when the sun comes out the bug and stuff go back in. And the sun was coming up so all of them were coming up for another day but that night haunted me for ever so I quit that job for another job. And when it hit the sun in the museum I ran out as fast as I could out the doors. I have learnt that Moa means chicken in some languages that's what I have learnt from a night at the Museum.