Great poem here Kayla, I love how you used adjectives and the way you told us about it but you didn't tell us what it was. Next time you might want to make it a little more exciting but apart from that Great Job.
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Great poem here Kayla, I love how you used adjectives and the way you told us about it but you didn't tell us what it was. Next time you might want to make it a little more exciting but apart from that Great Job.
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