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The Cardboard Cathedral

By Bruce Granshaw

Knowledge: List 2 things from the text

1. Did you know the new cardboard cathedral is not just made out cardboard it is made out of wood,cardboard, glass and plastic.

2. There was an earthquake that hit at 22 February 2011 and a lot of people were injured and trapped under buildings.

Comprehension: List the main thing in the text and a new title.

One of the main things was that the most popular buildings the cathedral was unsafe so they had to put it down because of the earthquake that happen in 22 February 2011 so they made a new one out of cardboard,wood and glass. I think this text should be called Earthquake Gone Wrong.

Application: Draw a three frame picture strip

On Tuesday 22 February 2011 it was a great day till this happened. All the buildings were damaged...

But the one building of all was the cathedral so a week  after the earthquake happen some builders came and see what it look like so they can make a new one so here some of the people that made that happen and make it look like it is know Shigeru Ban if it wasn't him it wouldn't look like that, if it wasn't for the owners of the cathedral that could get Shigeru Ban.    

Know that the cardboard cathedral is done by the one and only Shigeru Ban that designed it and the owners the made Shigeru Ban come to designed the one and only cardboard cathedral.

Analysis: Make a flowchart of the main thing’s in the text

Synthesis new ideas: Name one thing you would change

One thing I would change is that at the start there is a capital letter in Christchurch and there two capital letter in there that in Christchurch when there’s only one. I would like to change the tile for the paragraph’s because it too hard to read.

Evaluate-make: Rate this text out  of 10

I rate like text out of 10 a 8 because there was a mistake on the first page and  that the title's  are to hard to understand for me and many other people that would read this story but everything else is perfect.